Motherhood beats all to hell

来源: carpediem 于 2011-08-07 20:19:30 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (392 bytes)
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A 7000-squre-foot mansion is an illusion to a mom. Not to mention an old loner's confession which was full of self-pity.

The parallel sentences are very powerful, and the ending is perfect! I only found that two however's in the second paragraph don't sound very soothing:)

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