Another great piece! I like it!

1. comparing myself with five years ago, I am now a changed person.

How about "comparing myself with five years ago to now, I am a changed person."  

2. but feel grateful with (for) what I do have.

3. on a fast track in getting... - on a fast track to getting...

4. I no longer mouthing along - I no longer mouth along

5. I have a new home and working - I have a new home and am working

6. 觉得 evolving 用得不太合适， 用 expanding 较好

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• Sorry. Should be "comparing myself five years ago to now, -NewVoice- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 17:33:21

• thanks, sis! all accepted! -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 17:41:09

• while correcting them, I had to reject two, :) -非文学青年- ♀ (168 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 17:46:09

• I have one more correction: -NewVoice- ♀ (220 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 18:58:51

• nod, nod. thanks, sis! -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 19:27:55