My comments: (Good work)

来源: NewVoice 于 2011-08-02 09:37:09 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (959 bytes)
回答: 【翻译听写】 论礼仪: 交作业 由 bolang 于 2011-08-01 21:54:06

1. alike - like

2. If people do not wear clothing, they will be naked and will be mocked, and these will cause moral corruption.   (加个连接词)

3.conflictions - conflicts

4. If the socity is (were) a train, etiquette (would be) just likes the rails;

这句话和下句话要用虚拟语气。

5. typo: parters - partners

 

所有跟帖： 

• Many Thanks -bolang- ♀ 给 bolang 发送悄悄话 (439 bytes) () 08/02/2011 postreply 10:12:42

请您先登陆，再发跟帖！