My comments: (Good work)

来源: 2011-08-02 09:37:09 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读:

1. alike - like

2. If people do not wear clothing, they will be naked and will be mocked, and these will cause moral corruption.   (加个连接词)

3.conflictions - conflicts

4. If the socity is (were) a train, etiquette (would be) just likes the rails;

这句话和下句话要用虚拟语气。

5. typo: parters - partners