A few small corrections:

来源: NewVoice 于 2011-07-19 19:09:15 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (512 bytes)

1. all kinds of talent - all kinds of talents

2. which only partially owned  - which are only ...

3. such as light, sharp, flexible,elegant and feather brilliant - such as lightness, sharpness, flexibility, elegence, and brilliant feathers (need to use nouns for characteristics).

4. living with honey - living on honey

5. The nature lists it - This is not accurate; maybe we can say "nature makes it"

Great job!

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• Agreed. One question -EnLearner- ♀ 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (167 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 19:55:20

• 愚公，你说的有道理，不过网上查了查，也有用living creature的， -beautifulwind- ♀ 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (24 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 20:42:49

• 回复：愚公，你说的有道理，不过网上查了查，也有用living creature的， -EnLearner- ♀ 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (826 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 21:08:01

• 谢愚公！ -beautifulwind- ♀ 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 21:26:54

• 非常感谢newvoice的批改！太学东西了！！！ -beautifulwind- ♀ 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/19/2011 postreply 20:36:46

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