A few small corrections:

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1. all kinds of talent - all kinds of talents

2. which only partially owned  - which are only ...

3. such as light, sharp, flexible,elegant and feather brilliant - such as lightness, sharpness, flexibility, elegence, and brilliant feathers (need to use nouns for characteristics).

4. living with honey - living on honey

5. The nature lists it - This is not accurate; maybe we can say "nature makes it"

Great job!