The first snow was coming.(你这个句子表将来,好像) How beautiful it was! It was quietly floated(愚教授已经说了) day and night, covering the hills, covering the meadows, covering the roofs of the residents' houses, and covering the graves of the dead. Among the mist(你这是雾吧), only the rivers drew curly black lines on the beautiful picture. In addition, the bald trees, with the grayish sky as the background, appeared to be more interlacing and charming. When the first snow came, how silent and quiet it was. All kinds of sounds tent? to be slient and all kinds of noise turned into tender music. The clop of horses as well as the sound of wheels were(这里觉得该是was,因为主语是clop) not audible any more. Only the jingle bell played the harmonious melody with the joyous rhythm sounding as(as用的不对,原文as。。。as行) children's heart beating.
砖头来鸟。
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谢谢菲教授!你是好教授也是好助教,愚公是好助教也是好教授。
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