翻的好。

来源: EnLearner 于 2011-07-12 20:43:33 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (698 bytes)
回答: 翻译和听写作业八（The First Snow） 由 beautifulwind 于 2011-07-11 22:34:58

 

这次不用苦思冥想了吧？

It was quietly floated ... --> It was quitely floating ...?

                        or --> It floated quietly ...?

only the rivers drew curly black lines -- It appears that there is only one river?

只有河流在美丽的画面上划出一道曲曲弯弯的黑线, here 一道 not 一道道 ?

 

Just my two cents.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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