顺多了。接着改,也别which了

Bruce is my former colleague. He holds clambake party every year at his private beach. The location is about 60 miles driving from Seattle.

也可以这样:

Every year, Bruce, a former colleague of mine, holds clambake party at his private beach which is located at about 60 miles (whatever direction)from Seattle.

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Every summer, Bruce, a former colleague of mine, holds a clambake party at his private beach 60 miles from Seattle.

 
 
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