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本帖于 2026-05-02 06:12:03 时间, 由普通用户 godog 编辑

You asked if I love you, how deeply?

If I love you, how much?

My affection is true, my love is true.

Representing my heart, on you the Moon has a crush.

 

You asked if I love you, how deeply?

If I love you, how much?

My affection never fades, my love never changes.

Representing my heart, on you the Moon has a crush.

 

A kiss, a soft touch

strokes my heart like a brush.

To date, a deep affection

lets me miss you so much.

 

You asked if I love you, how deeply?

If I love you, how much?

Think about it, take a look.

Representing my heart, on you the Moon has a crush.

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Go兄译得别有风格,very stylish! 期待更多! -暖冬cool夏- 给 暖冬cool夏 发送悄悄话 暖冬cool夏 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/01/2026 postreply 14:58:37

都加上了。周末愉快! -godog- 给 godog 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/02/2026 postreply 06:15:13

欣赏学习~ ~ -JoyAnna.- 给 JoyAnna. 发送悄悄话 JoyAnna. 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/02/2026 postreply 06:29:15

谢谢Go兄这么认真!译得很好,韵脚意思都好,stroke my heart like a brush,特别喜欢!五月快乐 -暖冬cool夏- 给 暖冬cool夏 发送悄悄话 暖冬cool夏 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/02/2026 postreply 11:39:48

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