先生写得非常漂亮，相信能成就不少良缘。 我只是提出一点小想法。说得不对, 请先生海涵。
1. The use of “Miss” is too formal, it is better to omit the salutation and just use first name or even nickname.
2. Following two sentences sound too cliché to me. I wonder if anyone can still be touched by these clichés. It is better to quote something else.
- It seems that three autumns have elapsed if we don't see each other for a day (一日不见，如隔三秋)
- I will love you for the rest of my life with all my heart, until seas go dry and rocks turn rotten (海枯石烂不变心)
3. English seems a little bit too old-fashioned to me, like "unite in holy matrimony", “made your acquaintance” et al.
