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The strategies for minimizing negative impacts of shift work depend on how thoroughly a shift worker understands the impacts, how effectively a shift worker makes adjustments, and how strongly a shift worker attains supports from families, friends and coworkers

how about following:

The strategies for minimizing negative impacts of shift work depend on a thorough understanding of the impacts, effective adjustments being made, and a strong supporting from families, friends and coworkers.

Like your references, very clear to readers

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你说法更精炼,谢谢. -dlhy- 给 dlhy 发送悄悄话 dlhy 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/03/2011 postreply 11:00:11

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