大家都那么熟了,我就不怕露怯了。哈哈。Jenna别介意我说错的地方哈。
learning writing--practicing
in elementary schools--schools?你上了好几个小学?
even on dinner tables --tables,我不确定要不要加s
and moving on to next one the next day.---moving on to the next in the following day.
With a “scientific” mind--不知道mind改成mindset(思维定式)是否更好。
for lacking of vocabularies-----lacking前面加my或者·my limited English vocabulary; vocabularies虽然有复数形式,但我觉得这里是个集合名词,最好用单数,而且加上修饰English vocabulary。这个地方待其他牛人来讲解。
that golden age for reading novels--里的that我仍然觉得用the更好,跟前面一段提到的读小说时代离得有点远,中间插了不少其他内容。
because I have so much of my own stories to struggle with。这里如果用so much,后面跟的stories是可数,但是so much又可以接to struggle with,所以我觉得有点别扭。
We women tend to focus on our own emotions, our own life stories----focus on our own emotions and life stories
every minor details of ---details是不是应该改单数?