我改得不对的地方请其他同学指出来，Jenna也别介意，我也是在练习写作，水平亟待提高。

大家都那么熟了，我就不怕露怯了。哈哈。Jenna别介意我说错的地方哈。

learning writing--practicing

in elementary schools--schools？你上了好几个小学？

even on dinner tables --tables，我不确定要不要加s

and moving on to next one the next day.---moving on to the next in the following day.

With a “scientific” mind--不知道mind改成mindset（思维定式）是否更好。

for lacking of vocabularies-----lacking前面加my或者·my limited English vocabulary； vocabularies虽然有复数形式，但我觉得这里是个集合名词，最好用单数，而且加上修饰English vocabulary。这个地方待其他牛人来讲解。

that golden age for reading novels--里的that我仍然觉得用the更好，跟前面一段提到的读小说时代离得有点远，中间插了不少其他内容。

because I have so much of my own stories to struggle with。这里如果用so much，后面跟的stories是可数，但是so much又可以接to struggle with，所以我觉得有点别扭。

 We women tend to focus on our own emotions, our own life stories----focus on our own emotions and life stories

every minor details of ---details是不是应该改单数？