Excellent writing! May need a little tweak.

If I am wrong, just kick it aside. :)

what sets Ben apart is his attitude toward music and his students.
>>sets ***** apart 分开放, 隔离开
stand out : 突出; 显眼, 超群
what makes Ben stand out is ....

We could tell from our initial acquaintance that Ben has an intrinsic love of playing the piano. (sounds a little awkward to me)
>>In the very first time we met Ben, he struck us favourably as a spirited young man who loves playing the piano from the bottom of his heart.

He encourages students' equality and initiation in the learning process.
>> He treats his students equally and encourages their own initiative in the learning process
initiation: 发起, 创始
initiative: 主动性, 首创精神

please don't hesitant to contact us. (minor grammar mistake)
>> please don't be hesitant to contact us.

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• 回复：Excellent writing! May need a little tweak. -selfselfself- ♂ (136 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 19:41:02

• 问俺偶拜8妹傅好。就是俺当偶像崇拜的88queen她妹的师傅的简称。 -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:24:09

• 您好，看看我能给你一点建议不？ -selfselfself- ♂ (1658 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:53:19

• 多谢8妹傅! 我下去细嚼嚼。 -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:01:05

• goo了一下,老外也有问的,答案是两者都通用,您扣的很细法呀~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:51:06

• 没办法，工作中a, an, the, 时态和单复数老被挑刺 -selfselfself- ♂ (24 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:58:33

• 啥工种呀，a，an，the的这么较汁,给国会起草议案的俺搞不懂 -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:02:36

• 88 queen 来了，多谢指正。. -geopolitics- ♀ (333 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:20:47

• I would say, "please don't HESITATE":) -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (76 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:27:40

• 那大拿就是你了：） -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:29:16

• hehehe,其实我的英语是整个坛子里最差的.所以,我才来这里玩英语。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:34:00

• 瞎谦虚啥呀，熊老第一个跳掌反对~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:54:37

• 不是谦虚。是今天终于鼓足勇气说了实话：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:32:14

• oops, "an" adjective -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:29:17

• geo姐，客气啥呀，互相讨论，挑刺永远比长刺容易~ -lilac09- ♀ (195 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:47:29

• 这一声姐叫的，姐想不老都难啊。I did make a careless mistake. Thanks again for y -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:54:32

• for your excellent input. -geopolitics- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:55:08

• geo妹见谅，俺现在都争当姐，当姐牛呀：）~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:57:29

• 应该还是 Queen 牛吧？ :-) -selfselfself- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 20:59:22

• Dollar Queen才牛，大侃Queen实在是..唉~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:08:11

• Sis晚上好，祝你新的一周快乐，永远如春天般的灿烂亮丽。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2010 postreply 21:40:07