深深的一段情 So briefly we were together ==> How about "such a deep affection"?
教我思念到如今 The sweetness lingering forever ==> How about "I miss it day and night till now"?
你去看一看 you'll know when you look ==> How about "you'll see when you look"?
• 回复:Nice work! Here are a few suggestions: -马下人- ♂ (53 bytes) () 03/26/2014 postreply 06:29:07