要正确翻译好诗，必须了解诗人，建议你们看看：

What Lips My Lips Have Kissed - The Loves and Love Poems of Edna St. Vincent Millay

https://books.google.com/books?id=lDS06-6ixV0C&pg=PA200&lpg=PA200&dq=%22Being+Young+and+Green,+I+said+in+love%27s+despite:%22&source=bl&ots=HhllOY5AxY&sig=iWlWqcHf-G06dYBCrsU-ShVv1h4&hl=en&sa=X&ei=2jX6VK7JD4SvyATc8oCwCA&ved=0CDUQ6AEwBA#v=onepage&q=%22Being%20Young%20and%20Green%2C%20I%20said%20in%20love%27s%20despite%3A%22&f=false

不了解诗人很难琢磨她诗里的意思的，尤其是若文法句法都没有理解对的话。

所有跟帖： 

• 我只是建议你们看看那篇文章。读一下第200页你可能就会更好地理解这首诗了。 -rancho2008- ♀ (782 bytes) () 03/06/2015 postreply 21:49:19

• its ancient secrets= the mind's ancient secrets -马下人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/07/2015 postreply 07:21:12