Please revise,thx!

 The basic meaning is hidden in  structure, etc.,  of Chinese characters and letters  of corresponding English words,   the connection is vitally interrelated.  Further, it can be related to a master painting design, such as in Ilya Repin's famous painting  "Religious procession in Kursk province” , which would be a vivid illustration of this idea. But how to analyze it?

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• 既然没人改，我的手也痒，我就来改改吧。再说，这块论坛也太冷清了。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (727 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 18:23:13

• Thx! if you may point out the error or deficency in my writing w -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:01:58

• I checked hide vs. conceal, it suits me to read different versio -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:06:09

• correspond vs. coincide, as well, again it is a good in "groupin -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:24:16

• 你的correspond 不是当动词用的，所以我以为你要说的是“相应”的意思。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:32:04

• 你如果把你想说的用中文表达出来，我或许可以给你提些有用的建议。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (66 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:35:09

• ThX! My idea frustrated some Americans, whose mind is in confine -走马读人- ♂ (207 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:47:12

• 我觉得原文本来就有些问题： -聚曦亭- ♀ (744 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:55:34

• 两个意思放在了一个句子 very good point. -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:59:18

• 你是不是想说： -聚曦亭- ♀ (401 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:05:38

• 刪除一個意義單位是好的，使我得收穫. -走马读人- ♂ (32 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:11:37

• 如果你要说的就是我改后的中文意思，下面的英语大体说出了你想要说的。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (1135 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:22:49

• Thanks for your valuable criticism! -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:30:08

• 既然你问，我就实话实说。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (721 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:30:11

• Very good suggestion. I did not write in volumes nor i read adeq -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 19:54:27

• btw, I used to mistake 聚曦 as 聚嘯 :) -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:20:30

• 这使我想起了霍金的诗Howling ：( 开个玩笑！ -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:29:09

• mistake sb/sth for -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:30:16

• Very good. -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2014 postreply 20:52:54