【加队】The furthest distance in the world--Alaska version

本帖于 2013-02-04 11:10:29 时间, 由普通用户 rockcurrent 编辑

The furthest distance in the world,
Is not between a flying bird and a swimming fish.
But when I call for your stepping forward,
Yet you are hesitating and not sure how to accomplish

The furthest distance in the world,
Is not between my calling and your hesitating.
But when my dream comes closer and closer,
Yet you even not notice a possible frustrating.

The furthest distance in the world,
Is not between the reality of my dream and your disappointment.
But when I know the rejoiceful color of Alaska in Fall,
Yet you only could gaze at the pictures of my excitement.

The furthest distance in the world,
Is not between your speculation and my thrills.
But when a colorful leaf falls into an endless loneliness,
Yet I know how senseless it is without your smiles.

The furthest distance in the world,
Is not between the missing and the loneliness.
But where by the shore you live in meekness,
and the far north where Pacific ocean dashes.

The furthest distance in the world,
Is between you and me to stand side by side, 
while sharing and pondering on the amazing beauty,
Should your idleness not subside.

Above is how a lazy guy looks like! :)

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Thx. I am looking forward to your stepping forward and post some -rockcurrent- 给 rockcurrent 发送悄悄话 rockcurrent 的博客首页 (57 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 12:38:53

Just to depict a lazy guy! Thx! -rockcurrent- 给 rockcurrent 发送悄悄话 rockcurrent 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 18:36:01

RC,你写E诗的速度怎么能这么快。不要太有才气,太浪漫好不好?:) -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (469 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 18:49:07

谢谢MF 可以赋予这段文字新的气息! -rockcurrent- 给 rockcurrent 发送悄悄话 rockcurrent 的博客首页 (78 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 19:32:23

嗯,好的。:) -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (43 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 19:36:15

Good point. Corrected already! -rockcurrent- 给 rockcurrent 发送悄悄话 rockcurrent 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 20:02:11

才思敏捷得迅雷不及掩耳,仰望。:) -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 21:46:09

很应景别致。四句一段,压二四句为多,节奏句长有什么讲究吗? -淘金客- 给 淘金客 发送悄悄话 淘金客 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 21:29:30

the main purpose is 应景别致, -rockcurrent- 给 rockcurrent 发送悄悄话 rockcurrent 的博客首页 (159 bytes) () 02/05/2013 postreply 07:31:11

我问你变成你问我?不能以问题回答问题。:)) -淘金客- 给 淘金客 发送悄悄话 淘金客 的博客首页 (227 bytes) () 02/05/2013 postreply 08:25:04

心得谈不上,得用心 要有真情。共勉。 -rockcurrent- 给 rockcurrent 发送悄悄话 rockcurrent 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 10:01:23

深情真挚的好诗。 -紫君- 给 紫君 发送悄悄话 紫君 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 09:40:53

谢谢Becca -rockcurrent- 给 rockcurrent 发送悄悄话 rockcurrent 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 10:57:15

Ding -hammerheadshark- 给 hammerheadshark 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 21:46:59

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