A vivid story!

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回答: The Quick Frozen Fish（写作练习）由 sportwoman 于 2012-09-30 11:29:34

Nice writing! It is fun to read! I just picked a few bricks from the first two paragraphs.

Last night some friends of mine came over for dinner. One of them brought me (some) tea leaves and a pack of fish from her friend. Those fish, according to my friend, were caught a few days ago, came frozen (freezed) and packaged in a zip-lock bag, which are commonly seen in the fish market, but at this moment I just could not (can't) get the name of them out of my mouth.

Since the city where I live is adjacent to the Atlantic ocean (Ocean), and here and there in the surrounding areas are sprinkled (?) with innumerable rivers and lakes, so if you are a fishing goer (fishing lovers) and have a boat you would have no trouble finding a good place to grab a bite (?).