Like your diary!

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回答: 冠盖满京华（日记）由 sportwoman 于 2012-04-07 21:21:22

I had many sleepless nights like yours.

- would "jelly-covered" be better than "jellies covered"?

- brought me -> brought to me (not sure)

- chat -> chatted

- my chocolate are all gone -> my chocolate is all gone (not sure)

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• 多谢指正！我的措辞比较口语化。 -sportwoman- ♀ (878 bytes) () 04/08/2012 postreply 04:55:55

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