俺一定不把 Lilac MM 当外人.

 

Men always set their eyes on beautiful women and found out later that beauty is only skin deep, haha.

It is difficult to write love stories, because they have been told many times. I like the story. In addition to the storyline, I like the way you tell the story. If I interpret it correctly, snow represents the unnamed girl in the story - common and plain, yet pure and beautiful in her own way. Photography is also a very good choice. Even though a photographer can capture the physical beauty of a girl with his camera, he still needs to find the inner beauty in her with his heart.

 

While reading along, I found a few tiny bricks:

Northern city – northern city

talent in photography – talent at photography

good at composition and color – good at composition and coloring

weight of the snow accumulating on their - weight of the snow accumulated on their

heavy snow deposits on - heavy snow deposited on

Amateur artist with good looks - Amateur artist with a good look

Downright Depressed - Downright depressed

lense – lens

 They continued to share what had happened in their lives and exchaneged idea

 

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• 谢谢声姐的讲评和砖头~~ :D -lilac09- ♀ (7061 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 11:21:26

• 检讨一下。给了一堆乱砖头。没看清楚就仍出去了。下次一定注意。 -NewVoice- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 18:30:35

• 声姐太客气了，有些东西大家一起讨论讨论就更清楚了~~：） -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2011 postreply 08:59:11