写出我的第一首英文歌曲“ Are You Ready", 感谢LiuMu提供的灵感

把人家的英文诗改得面目全非：)

Baby, are you ready
Let's climb the mountains,
 While you stand by me.
Baby, are you ready
Let's touch the waves 
Let's go to see the sea
Baby, I miss your smile
Like whispering wind, you sent to me.

Baby, as we promised
Don't be sad, don't hold your tears
I know I am a fool
But I know you are my world
If you bled
I bleed the same
If you're scared
I am on my way.

Baby, are you ready
Let's walk in the clouds,
 Touching the dream
Baby, are you ready
Let me hold your hands
Say I love you

 

所有跟帖： 

• very nice shot! -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 08:34:00

• Love is thick in the air! I love it. -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 08:45:43

• 能把英文歌随手弹唱得如此行云流水般流畅好听，你真是第一人！你的进步真是像坐了火箭一样！：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (45 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 10:39:20

• 美坛出人才啊 -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 16:11:00

• will not let one u unturned;)) -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 16:12:00

• 有typo吗？ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 17:44:00

• 能写词，能作曲，能弹，能唱的全能型音乐人！听得出来，这歌词里加入了歌者自己的元素和故事，还有情感。欣赏。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 12:15:48

• 再听再赞！周末听挺好！ -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 13:03:22

• 果然是高手，上来就baby ，直接了当 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 15:06:15

• 一直baby没停过；） -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 16:55:00

• 动听！大赞 -疏影笑寒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 20:06:53

• 恭喜欲哥。谢谢网管，首页进来，写出我的第一首英文歌曲“ Are You Ready", 感谢LiuMu提供的灵感 推荐成功 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/28/2021 postreply 22:43:33

• 先大大地点个赞！ 然后再“挑刺”。“挑刺”比原创容易多了，so here are 老汉's 2 cents: -johniewalker- ♂ (816 bytes) () 06/29/2021 postreply 08:24:10