double your fun: (my try)

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回答: 学英语要练写作simplex2011-04-23 17:47:08

(to be continued)

I could feel the pride from deep within --there is no one else like me,  who feels obligated to be this generous and compassionate on every occassion. Since i was totally lost in this isolated island, I even ate birds' eggs to stave off starvation. Even though  I felt  more and more hungery  with the new day coming in, I still did not hesitate the sacrifice the last slice of bread for that skinny dog. If I was  buried in the island tommorrow,  I could die with honour and dignity for my big heart...

It took a while to get the sleeping bag and tent tidied up. "I cann't afford to sit here waiting death. I got to get out of here. " I said.

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很有味道。我来这一周,只见你一个知己 -simplex- 给 simplex 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2011 postreply 22:10:52

给你应应景。the应为to。另几个typos,不说了。 -cicila- 给 cicila 发送悄悄话 cicila 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2011 postreply 22:20:27

看到了。我喜欢你的英语。 -simplex- 给 simplex 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2011 postreply 22:23:47

你写的非常好。引我冒了一泡。听说新加波治安很好, 你们在那里一定很安全:) -cicila- 给 cicila 发送悄悄话 cicila 的博客首页 (85 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 21:52:04

我要向你学英语。由于治安好,很多老太太半夜走着到我这来 -simplex- 给 simplex 发送悄悄话 simplex 的博客首页 (18 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 22:09:47

那好啊,以后你可以收教学费了。现在工作难找, -cicila- 给 cicila 发送悄悄话 cicila 的博客首页 (148 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 22:21:51

hahaha 听说美气一夹轮4元多。真坑人。新加坡东西便宜。我刚吃完 -simplex- 给 simplex 发送悄悄话 simplex 的博客首页 (36 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 23:00:22

回复:double your fun: (my try) -浮上来冒个小泡- 给 浮上来冒个小泡 发送悄悄话 (39 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 19:23:28

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