想妹妹 (儿歌）

妹妹，昨晚我又失眠

Peering through the screen
Gazing at the sky
I long for my sis
When months scurry by

Scraggly I'm getting
Scraggy I'm turning
For unaltered love
Is strongly burning

妹妹，想你。。。

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• 欢迎line诗人来美语坛,你的英诗既地道又流畅,谢谢分享. -婉蕠- ♀ (690 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 08:43:50

• 我天天背字典 -line- ♀ (152 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 09:06:07

• 觉得line是谦虚 - passionate lines come from passionate people -billnet- ♂ (258 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 09:27:59

• 我是新人。的确， passionate lines come from passionate people -line- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 13:02:20

• 欢迎，希望新人多贡献这样的琅琅上口的诗句。 -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 13:51:09

• 谢谢回复，周日快乐。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 11:48:34

• 向婉蕠问好，周么愉快！ -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 09:30:08

• Thanks.billnet,you have a nice Sunday. -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 11:47:51

• 替你试译一下 -bahai- ♂ (1846 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 09:32:55

• 用词很浪漫有新意，真的不是bear么？ -薆馜- ♀ (405 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 14:07:41

• 你的改动很好 -line- ♀ (351 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 14:46:33

• 我想你是想说 -line- ♀ (131 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 16:48:19