Volume, speed and clearity are very good! I feel you can pay attention to the following words
/English/ sounds like/ yinglish/ not /\ˈiŋ-glish/
/Hive/ sounds like /heiv/ rather than /haiv/. I feel there is an issue about /ei/ and /ai/. /ai/ the jaw needs to drop in order to pronounce /a/
/Busy/ sounds like /Bisi/ rather than /Bizi/
Just my two cents and have a nice weekend!