酒后的几个半句

来源: falsetruth 于 2010-12-25 03:59:18 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (686 bytes)
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over bump, over hump
through corn, through thorn
over ridge, over bridge,
through wind, through wave
i go, i go, i go
from west to midwest
from midwest to east
i go, i go, i go
with burns, with blisters
through fire, through freeze
o, rain, whip me
to make me swift
o, snow, freeze me
to tame the flame

i long for the hour
of eternity
when eyes meet:
love in hers
lust in mine
and vice versa
in this hour
words are extra
so are scarves, sleeves
and slacks
but movements speak
leopards leap
tigers tumble
observing the merge

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• 节奏感真强，读起来真美，喝醉啦真好。 -cicila- ♀ 给 cicila 发送悄悄话 cicila 的博客首页 (110 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 07:50:19

• sharp ear and eye. indeed, the first stanza was done while i was -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (63 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:34:45

• the first stanza was done while i was drinking -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:56:04

• to be more exact, (you should say) -cicila- ♀ 给 cicila 发送悄悄话 cicila 的博客首页 (386 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 17:23:35

• haha yes I drank at least 80 proof of vodka:) -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (110 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:00:06

• not just that. -cicila- ♀ 给 cicila 发送悄悄话 cicila 的博客首页 (108 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 19:03:19

• I see:) I didn't know that 二锅头 really made it:) -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (39 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 19:58:46

• seems u went to party last night, a friendly reminder: -fearcpatest- ♀ 给 fearcpatest 发送悄悄话 fearcpatest 的博客首页 (317 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 12:15:34

• thank you!!! i did not know much of etiquette in this regard -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (82 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:38:44

• LOL. Then did you get gifts from your enemies -cicila- ♀ 给 cicila 发送悄悄话 cicila 的博客首页 (349 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 17:49:47

• very true. Enimies are the real judges (friends only flatter). -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (30 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:08:43

• Lenin? -cicila- ♀ 给 cicila 发送悄悄话 cicila 的博客首页 (99 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:54:25

• no gift from enimies. but they have made me braver:) -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:25:38

• 酒后赋诗，想必真切。 -斓婷- ♀ 给 斓婷 发送悄悄话 斓婷 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 14:49:15

• true, very true except it is hard to decipher -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (155 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:44:35

• lol...Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. -斓婷- ♀ 给 斓婷 发送悄悄话 斓婷 的博客首页 (72 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 17:07:37

• Thank you. Ben was great. He was the man of wine and wit:) -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:03:58

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