i've read your poem many times now

rain, snow, sleet or hail

wind will quest with your sail

untold a beautiful story

unfolds only in memory

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• great poem. 开诗歌班偶也报名。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 06:51:51

• ３rd line -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (118 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 08:25:32

• 3rd line -falsetruth- ♀ (368 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 10:43:00

• oh, i see. thanks. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (175 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 11:07:20

• would be 'an untold':) -falsetruth- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 11:50:33

• haha, 对。不能怪我，我初中没毕业。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 12:02:45

• 我今天听了几只中国歌， -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (186 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 08:34:16

• Interesting. Thank you for letting me know. I didn't realize tha -falsetruth- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 10:47:45