不名，你这诗不好接。我来试着和你的诗.（费了些时间）

sleepless is the night
boundless is the sky
from forests to plains
from oceans to mountains

i indulge in the rain
with breeze, the gentle blend.
when did the story begin
when will the yearning end?


i swim in river of time
which takes me to the shore
you gave me bunch of thyme
warbling the flying condor

now I can feel the wind blow
hear the sea-gull concerto
the story started from there
the lead role is always you :)

joyful is the memory
beautiful is the story
blue still is the sky
tearful, your gentle eyes

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• Thank you for the beautiful poem. -不会起名- ♂ (142 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 12:11:56

• 我写＂blue still is the sky＂ 这句是inspired by这首浪漫音乐＂蓝色夜曲＂。 -fizzer- ♀ (396 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 13:22:32

• very romantic, very pleasing, very tender -不会起名- ♂ (88 bytes) () 07/11/2010 postreply 13:45:25