给我的军师。我来拜山学艺。

i missed the "not" when i wrote
i missed the site when i drove
why can i not forget to
miss the Darling River day and night

you said," missing words is fine
people can still understand
missing site, that's all right
pay attention to the sign"

but my friend
why did you intend
to forget to tell me
when the yearning's going to end

所有跟帖： 

• 澳洲Darling River非常美，养育了Aboriginal people。 -fizzer- ♀ (130 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 09:39:42

• 谢谢你介绍澳洲的风土人情，长见识了。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 14:52:10

• 没说明白。我是来美语世界拜山跟大家学艺，不是来拜军师~~ -fizzer- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 11:35:03

• 欢迎您来美语坛，大家一起学习，共同进步。 -紫君- ♀ (1365 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 14:57:26

• Many thanks. -fizzer- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 15:18:39

• 有水平。看来你一直想友人。 -doitthen- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 12:15:35

• 谢doitthen朋友。你的ID很有意义，让我想起来 -fizzer- ♀ (156 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 13:27:07

• 写的地道流畅的一首英诗，自然生动的对话。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 15:00:02

• 谢谢紫君鼓励。那的确是我跟军师的一段对话。 -fizzer- ♀ (135 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 15:17:42

• 英诗：Yearning 作者：fizzer -紫君- ♀ (3170 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 15:24:55

• 谢谢紫君。设计得太美了。那颗大水滴好似一滴大眼泪一样。 -fizzer- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 15:55:47

• 不知为何这首是令我流泪 -hahaman- ♀ (300 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 19:31:07

• 谢谢hahaman。写得真好。 -fizzer- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/29/2010 postreply 21:09:36

• 你写的不错 -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/30/2010 postreply 12:22:09

• is your friend in real life or over the internet? -doitthen- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2010 postreply 06:54:44

• actually, that doesn't matter, do哥. what really matters is -fizzer- ♀ (83 bytes) () 07/01/2010 postreply 07:58:56

• 谢谢解释。明白了。 -doitthen- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2010 postreply 08:02:24