英语作文：My Right to Try（4th & 5th Grade Essays）

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英语作文：My Right to Try（4th & 5th Grade Essays）ZT

1st Place:

The Right of a Family
By Tasha Holtman

When I was in Russia I met two kids named Max and Irina. Max was six. Irina was nine. We were having supper together. At first I thought they were just regular kids but after supper I realized that they were being adopted. They had lived in an orphanage for one or two years. Before that they lived with their parents. They had to leave home because their parents were too poor to take care of them.
Max and Irina and all children should have the right to a family that can put them to bed in a special way, wake them up in a special way, cook them special meals, read them special books of their choice, and that has enough money to feed them and give them shelter. No child should have parents that have to leave them at an orphanage because they are too poor to take care of them.

A family can give you things that will help you all your life. When you are young your parents teach you how to walk, talk, and eat. Those things are important to you later so you can take care of yourself. When you are older your parents teach you how to read, write, and do math. Those are useful in life because they help you do your job. It’s important to have a job so that you can have enough money to live. Families can give you advice when you are grownup. Families can give you birthday calls and calls to tell you that they love you. Even grownups need to know that they are loved. You can learn things better from people who love you. Max and Irina learned most of what they knew from their parents. My adopted sister from Russia didn’t learn how to walk, talk or feed herself until she got to our house. I taught her how to use a bottle by putting her hands around it and saying, “Tip it. Tip it.”

There are many different ways to lose your family. Those ways include your parents dying or being too poor to take care of you, your parents going off to war, or your parents being separated from you in a famine, from illness, or from natural disasters. Some of the ways we can protect the right of a family are giving people good jobs, giving people good doctors and preventing wars. If kids do lose their families we should try not to give them to orphanages. Instead we should find a new family for them.


2nd Place:

Right to Education
By Arunima Shiney Ajay


Every child has the right to education. What is a right? A right is different from a wish which is often unreasonable and would not go with our way of life. Even if it was reasonable, the public would not be involved with it. A right is also different from a duty, where whatever happens you have to do your duty, whether or not you want to. Though you will always have your right, you can definitely refuse to use your rights.
Why is education so important? Education gives you a chance to get a better job. This is one of the most important things about education and what it can teach you. Education also teaches you responsibility and how to use it. Education is the right that will help you use and fight for your other rights too. This is the most important thing education teaches.

What would happen without education? First, we would not know how to use other rights properly either so they wouldn’t be real rights at all. Many people would have much more terrible jobs. Education also teaches the basic math, art, language arts, and quite a lot more basics too. Without these we couldn’t live our usual, everyday life.

But just because every person has a right to education not everyone has good education or any education at all.

We need to realize this is not a real right, seeing that some can not go to school or other educating places. Many schools all over the United States can not afford to give children the education they need. We need to help. We need to stop this. But how?


3rd Place :

My Right to Try
By Oanh Truong

The most important right to me is to try because I can try to be happy, but I don’t have to. I can try to be nice. Sometimes things can go wrong, not all the time. I can try to sing, dance, etc. Some day I might accomplish all those things. I can try. Probably I can’t do it, but I can try. Trying helps you by doing more and more things. I am doing this so I can try to win. I don’t have to win, but I can try. You can try everything (well, kinda). I can try, try, and not get it, but at least I tried. That’s all that matters.
I can try to stay up all night, but I have to ask my parents first. I can try to make my life better by trying to make my sisters stop annoying me and my big brother.

It is hard doing things in life, but it would be much easier if you try. Don’t give up; you have a right to try! Try, try, try, and try! I have a right to try. You have a right to try. Everyone has a right to try! If I can try, you can try too. You don’t have to be perfect to try. It doesn’t matter if you’re ugly, pretty tall, or short, you can still try. If you try you can learn more and more. Just try if you can or cannot. It’s fun to try lots of things.



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