Daffodil (黄水仙,我最爱的一种花)
You say I'm always happy,
Or, I just look so?
When has the cloud shadowed?
I ask myself,
also why-so and how-so?
Am I like an angel?
how come I can feel the devil?!
"Don't think too much, silly girl!"
OK,
Advil, bedevil, and daffodil......
也写首诗,不知道自己写的是什么体,不过写诗真的很好玩~
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Very good !!!
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05/05/2010 postreply
12:33:53
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我知道你厉害,帮我改改呢?
-小千...千与千寻-
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05/05/2010 postreply
13:44:09
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It is perfect !!!
-star-night-
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05/05/2010 postreply
13:54:18
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顶才女妹妹!
-楚江-
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05/05/2010 postreply
13:06:58
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大姐好~我被你们惯坏了,嘿嘿~
-小千...千与千寻-
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05/05/2010 postreply
13:46:15
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顶!
-北京二号-
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05/05/2010 postreply
13:43:49
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二姐干啥我干啥,二姐写诗我突然也想写了,呵呵~
-小千...千与千寻-
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05/05/2010 postreply
13:47:00
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HA, wonderful little piece, lovely
-selfselfself-
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05/05/2010 postreply
14:20:40
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好漂亮的水仙花,好动人的英语诗。
-婉蕠-
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05/06/2010 postreply
08:34:33