鹰姐姐， 老熊怎逃了？贝多芬的三部曲他只式了两部（sonnets／儿歌）

sonnets = adagio
儿歌 = allegro
现在老熊需要 rondo （回文）。回文是什么让老熊自己摸索。但听说是十五行， 三个韵，十三行是八音节，两行是四音节， 并且这行四个音节要在诗里重复三次 （诗的开头， 和第二节和第三节的尾部）。
wiki说： The rondeau consists of thirteen lines of eight syllables, plus two refrains (which are half lines, each of four syllables), employing, altogether, only three rhymes. It has three stanzas and its rhyme scheme is as follows: (1) A A B B A (2) A A B with refrain: C (3) A A B B A with concluding refrain C. The refrain must be identical with the beginning of the first line.

哈哈
现在老熊可能又去海边了。

beside that rock in salty air
retreats a tired and sleepy bear
high waves now start to pound his toes
long willow leaves then poke his nose
and flounders jump out everywhere

why does the bear with hoary hair
relax in here, not in his lair?
why does this weary bear not doze
beside that rock?

a birdcall sends a smile so rare
across his face not really fair
his dangling tongue then quickly grows
from which profusely fluid flows
where does he drool for an affair?
beside that rock

所有跟帖： 

• 鹰姐姐， 看来你一出现 -hahaman- ♀ (22 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 18:18:27

• 蛤蛤鳗，你太厉害啊。怎么写出来的？看那么多rules， -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (84 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:07:01

• 鹰妹，你和我的爱不仅仅是在海滩，石边 -bearsback- ♂ (56 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:18:58

• 鹰姐姐，我也是头一次尝试。对我有点吃力. 写它 -hahaman- ♀ (32 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 20:21:15

• hahaha，写得太好玩了。越看越想笑啊。怎么想出来的？ -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (124 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:13:47

• 鹰妹，哈哈慢也许是youaresmart的徒弟。但我爱你在先 -bearsback- ♂ (52 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:24:28

• 你出来了。hehe，没生气吧。这个hahaman， -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (126 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:27:29

• 鹰妹，不瞒你说，我没写过回味诗。我导师也没写过 -bearsback- ♂ (8 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:31:46

• 熊老他怎么不出来了？ -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (54 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:18:25

• 看来我遇到了个劲敌。鹰妹，很显然，hahaman也在追你。 -bearsback- ♂ (18 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:28:02

• today i planted scarlet SAGEs at my garden, thinking of him, -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (3628 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:32:07

• 有点长，写的仓促。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (70 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:36:36

• sweetie -bearsback- ♂ (87 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:46:07

• sweetie, that's the best writing in this century. I love it. thi -bearsback- ♂ (172 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:43:13

• no，i dont wanna repost as long as you read it. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (62 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:49:27

• sweetie, I love you -bearsback- ♂ (4 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:52:36

• sorry，many grammatical errors. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (43 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:45:14

• sweetie don't worry. the content is what it matters. You are the -bearsback- ♂ (16 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:48:44

• what matters -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 20:10:34

• 飞鹰，这么好的帖，别埋没了。另开新帖吧。建议置顶到城门外！ -北京二号- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 19:50:36

• 里面那首诗写的太美了。英语味道100%. 鹰姐姐 -hahaman- ♀ (62 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 20:02:09

• 俺咋瞧着这微微静电要变烈烈闪电的说~~~~:) -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 20:28:34

• 据说老熊追鹰姐姐好像从2008年开始的。 -hahaman- ♀ (20 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 20:50:01

• 听说一个大师追你追的很火 -bearsback- ♂ (4 bytes) () 04/21/2010 postreply 07:28:15

• wow - 美啊！！ -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 21:16:29

• 每次读 -bearsback- ♂ (14 bytes) () 04/21/2010 postreply 10:58:10

• 好东东！！ -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/20/2010 postreply 21:19:07

• 写得真不错。第二节那个重复读着象３句半。haha -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/21/2010 postreply 18:31:23

• 鹰姐姐，慧眼呀。第二节真是３句半。 -hahaman- ♀ (34 bytes) () 04/21/2010 postreply 20:08:25

• 这诗不错，要是逸士大师能读到就好了， -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (124 bytes) () 04/21/2010 postreply 23:08:19

• 大师以前写的‘上班日记’挺逗的。。。 -hahaman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/21/2010 postreply 23:34:57

• 看了。你跟译大师是心有灵息。他那就是再是你呢。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (36 bytes) () 04/22/2010 postreply 07:44:26

• haha,鹰姐姐。吃饭时间到了。多吃身体好 -hahaman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/22/2010 postreply 08:50:16