用这个凑个数吧。

很拙, 以后有时间仔细精化一下。

look at sky whispering
"dear friend, how are you?"
your voice is resounding
"please return to OAK port"

think of the days we spent
sunny smile on my face
all the laughter and tears
form into a river winding

look westwards thinking
my heart's always with you
send my words, mr. wind
"back to me when you done"

:)

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• 亲爱的， 我很喜欢你的诗歌， 这是你心的话语 -bearsback- ♂ (242 bytes) () 04/01/2010 postreply 18:03:01

• 你真的会写。很美。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (90 bytes) () 04/01/2010 postreply 20:39:05

• sweetie -bearsback- ♂ (100 bytes) () 04/01/2010 postreply 21:00:17