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On this couplet,清秋hero(let me call this name temporary), Bear*****ack presented us again an epic poetry with surges of passion and romance.

Bear*****ack has been actively seeking out JOBs for a whole year. However, however, no jobs like Bear*****ack. Good thing for him, also for us, is a creative presentation of unforgettable emotions that he conveys from his poetry. Bear*****ack has composed many beautiful Sonnets and nursery rhymes(儿歌)which demonstrate his ability to combine the art of poetry with his sentimental themes, spirit, lyricism and elegance.

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temporary->temporarily -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/24/2010 postreply 20:04:06

亲爱的, 谢谢你的critical analysis, ha 你的文笔真好, 你真的让我 -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (138 bytes) () 02/24/2010 postreply 20:16:35

今年要从花里面找灵感。不同花写出不同的主题。give it a try -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/24/2010 postreply 20:31:32

谢谢鹰妹指点。 我要写, 要写花 -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (14 bytes) () 02/24/2010 postreply 20:33:30

hehe,花花心, -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (149 bytes) () 02/24/2010 postreply 20:39:16

sweetie, night -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (9 bytes) () 02/24/2010 postreply 20:43:01

should be "an epic poem" , not "an epic poetry" -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/24/2010 postreply 20:28:15

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