菜她师傅，俺的一分钱想法是~~

Given the short time, you did a wonderful job. For such a long article with so many big words and such complicated sentence structure, it will take me at least a week to straighten it out, then maybe another week to read it out aloud. I can never nail something like this over my lunch break. In fact, I can barely get my lunch done within an hour. :)

But since you are a respectful master, we are expecting more, much more from you. When a man is driven insane, he doesn't have to be fast-talking or murmuring. He would be moody. So you may need to pay some attention to the fluctuation in your tone to let listeners feel the intensity and desperation of that poor guy. Just my 1 cent.

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• Great, now can I borrow your plane? : ) -selfselfself- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2010 postreply 17:47:02

• You can never ever leave my little Sis behind~~ so heartbroken -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2010 postreply 17:56:46

• u r much better than i do.你们俩都是我偶像 -ryu,- ♂ (160 bytes) () 02/19/2010 postreply 18:04:11

• ryu,同学,俺发现你到处转抄俺的语录,说别人的话,让别人无话可说，是不:) -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2010 postreply 18:12:12

• ryu,同学,别生气，你紫姐姐逗你玩的说~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2010 postreply 19:24:18