Very clear and lovely

A few words:
An sounds like /ang/ rather than /3n/

Dangerous /r3s/ sounds weak

Result sounds like /rezault/ rather than /Rez3lt/

victim /tim/ should be /t3m/

Just my two cents.

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不太好意思,告诉你一个秘密 -梅石莹玉- 给 梅石莹玉 发送悄悄话 梅石莹玉 的博客首页 (150 bytes) () 01/25/2010 postreply 16:59:32

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