Good reading!

来源: lilac09 于 2010-01-03 10:15:53 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (145 bytes)
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train - sounds a little as chain
aw sound in dawdle and dawn
asteriSk: s is missed out

Just my 2 cents.
Keep up your good job! :)

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