let me try

本帖于 2009-12-06 04:54:03 时间, 由版主 林贝卡 编辑

1.

she looks around here
trying to find a good place
she sits by my side

2.

beauty walks by shore
leaving shadow in the sea
i jump to catch it


3. 姐俩

in a tiny boat
one fishes and the other sings
no dinner tonight

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PFPF。 -任我为- 给 任我为 发送悄悄话 任我为 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/03/2009 postreply 18:37:35

Here is one on nature -bearsback- 给 bearsback 发送悄悄话 bearsback 的博客首页 (60 bytes) () 12/03/2009 postreply 20:08:54

是不是on nature的haiku就不需要575 syllable pattern了? 我不懂。 -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/04/2009 postreply 08:06:36

I got it, today's poets use a variety of -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (31 bytes) () 12/04/2009 postreply 09:16:59

你这首[on nature],让我想起了梵高的油画《麦田里的乌鸦》. -紫君- 给 紫君 发送悄悄话 紫君 的博客首页 (501 bytes) () 12/04/2009 postreply 09:53:04

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