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she looks around here
trying to find a good place
she sits by my side
2.
beauty walks by shore
leaving shadow in the sea
i jump to catch it
3. 姐俩
in a tiny boat
one fishes and the other sings
no dinner tonight
let me try
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PFPF。
-任我为-
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12/03/2009 postreply
18:37:35
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Here is one on nature
-bearsback-
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12/03/2009 postreply
20:08:54
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是不是on nature的haiku就不需要575 syllable pattern了? 我不懂。
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12/04/2009 postreply
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I got it, today's poets use a variety of
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12/04/2009 postreply
09:16:59
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你这首[on nature],让我想起了梵高的油画《麦田里的乌鸦》.
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12/04/2009 postreply
09:53:04