鹰妹，你是我的永远的永远

Not the sun, the moon or the stars can compare
to your fair eyes, which power my feel mind
melt my heart, and kindle my love's fire
to which my lonely soul wishes to bind

as I lay my callous hand on your soft breast
as I lay my dry lips on your ruby face
my trembling self relishes heavenly rest
o, does an angel love a man so base?

when I wake up from my heart-thrilling dream
in sadness, helpless, empty and hollow
my tears roll from my eyes and flow in a stream
bitter rejection is too hard to swallow

heaven, do remove chains from the married
let the dream come true of the unmarried

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• remove chains from the married --> MBA -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 19:04:11

• 正好抓住你请教个问题 -念亲- ♀ (104 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 19:31:29

• haha you are right. compare and fire don't rhyme -tigersclaws- ♂ (115 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:04:14

• Thanks a 10^6! -北京二号- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:06:31

• Ok, I just checked Shakespeare and dictionaries -tigersclaws- ♂ (222 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:38:56

• 写得真好，一首深情感人的英语诗歌，颇有Shakespeare的风格。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 19:34:48

• feel mind --> feeble mind -tigersclaws- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:11:24

• 刚才在那边还想指出这句不通呢。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:10:55

• My cray-I supercomputer gives much wrath -tigersclaws- ♂ (61 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:40:28

• 真的？太搞了。换个机器嘛。那个８０年代的产物当了算了：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:47:57

• Sweetie you read my mind -tigersclaws- ♂ (239 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:56:53

• my tears --> tears, wishes --> longs -tigersclaws- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 08:12:39

• 哈哈，我知道是写给那个的了～ -梅石莹玉- ♀ (77 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:17:15

• You are too smart. :-) -念亲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:21:55

• only you say that because -梅石莹玉- ♀ (49 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:23:54

• You two are just just so smart. :-) -YuGong- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:56:31

• We three are just just just so smart. :-) -念亲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 22:02:42

• Ditto ^_* -梅石莹玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 07:10:53

• 美語壇愛情簡史 -Carpediem- ♂ (201 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:58:15

• nice one -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:59:14

• 相应你的号召，小Carpe, -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (63 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:14:07

• 其間尚有 -carpediem- ♂ (180 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:20:32

• 回复：其間尚有 -梅石莹玉- ♀ (148 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 07:05:44

• WXC --> match.com -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 08:07:43

• ?? -梅石莹玉- ♀ (31 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 09:20:32

• I came. I saw. I laughed. -carpediem- ♂ (204 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 10:17:02

• 回复：I came. I saw. I laughed. -梅石莹玉- ♀ (140 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 12:38:39

• I laugh at myself mostly. Hehe. -carpediem- ♂ (65 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 14:22:17

• 以后，再搞创作，就换个名字吧。好好的sonnet，大家都想歪了。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:07:34

• 求譯＂此地無銀三百兩＂ -carpediem- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:24:20

• r u my friend, dear carpediem? 有个歌里唱道：有些话是要说给懂得人听。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:29:31

• Ding! -YuGong- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:32:25

• 谢谢yugong。我昨天去了朋友家聚会, -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (75 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:38:21

• 回复：谢谢yugong。我昨天去了朋友家聚会, -YuGong- ♂ (190 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:43:14

• Sorry. 不過起哄真的很好玩;) -carpediem- ♂ (106 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:36:30

• 不是在沉默中死亡，就是在沉默中爆发，呵呵~~ -念亲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:39:06

• hehe，I like it。真想来起哄的，哪天我来跟你一起起哄， -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (42 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:44:30

• Sweetie, you know my music -tigersclaws- ♂ (22 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:37:34

• 写得很好。也跟你和念亲学到了loose rhyme：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:41:39

• 诗我已存，获尔梦大家也释放完了。飞鹰回家睡觉，版主删帖！ -念亲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 22:21:06