俺又来多嘴了。这种“big topic”文章不好写。易写泛写空。。。

俺很庆辛俺已再不用为什么考试而写这种干八八的命题作文了，这可能是变老的唯一好处。俺汗一个。

话又说回来，任何文章，都可以不写成干八八，任何文章再大的命题，都不要feel intimidated，从小处着手，从细解分析，小中见大，文章才能有血有肉。

楼主对命题有思考，您的观点是”高科技加大了贫富悬殊”, 支持的细节理由如下
1 Poor people at first can’t afford expensive hi-tech stuff.
2. Secondly using Hi-tech stuff needs some education and training, which is what the poor lack in.
3.Hi-tech let the rich richer.

这些想法都很好, 但细节展开不够，长难句堆砌，读起来发涩.. 既然您提到了bill gates,不如就拿他和microsoft说事.

俺就编个东东来分析:

Albert , a janitor in Microsoft who has 2 kids and wife to support, earns minimum wage 8 bucks per hour, less than 20k a year. A $500 buck cheap brand computer may be the last thing on his mind. Even if he buys one, he has very has limited usage of it expect checking emails or web surfing. Hi-tech for him seems only for entertainment.

While for Dennis, a software developer in Microsoft, with generous salary of 120K a year, buying a name brand computer is like buying a toy. After work, he moonlights as a part-time programmer for some small companies. Using his computer and programming skills, he raked in 50k in his spare time last year.

Bill Gate, the head of Microsoft, quadrupled his fortune to about 60 Billion in a couple of years. (bill gates这两年具体咋用高科技玩钱的，您得再google, google, 俺只是说个意思)

From above, we can see hi-tech bring Albert, on lower rung of society ladder, almost $0 extra profit; 50k more for middle class Dennis while billons of dollars more for hi-tech magnate Bill gates.

综上所述.分析, one can see at first the poor usually can’t afford…., even if they can afford, they don’t have enough education and training to use it to….. Hi-tech let the rich richer, the poor poorer. 这您把您的big gun，大长句都端出来，从理论高度上煽乎

您还可以再把问题拔高点，俺给你个reason NO 4,

Rich people can exert substantial influence over the government and even the direction of society. With money, power and knowledge, they can lobby for/against a bill for their own benefits to increase more fortune for them.

给出事例 for reason No4 ，老 bill again.
Last year, Bill Gates testified before the House Committee what he sees as a need to liberalize rules for H1-B visas for skilled foreign workers and he wants the government to make it easier for Microsoft to hire foreign-born workers due to the deficit of Americans with computer-science degrees.

Can you image how much influence Albert can bring for his job? Working his axx off to keep it is the only thing he can do to in this severe economic down turn.

最后，要收文了，把您权威统计搬出来镇场，说明您的理论不是自个躺被窝里瞎琢磨出来的
Last but not least, the American economic statistics show that, from 1990 to 2005, the income gap between the rich and the poor in the USA became larger than ever in the history. And many experts agree that the widespread use of new technology makes the gap wider instead of narrower between the poor and the rich

然后，您的conlusion段。文章结束

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