回复：大家看看这段是否有错？摘自美国传统杂志。。。

Rearrange the wording then you can tell clearer

we seemed willing neither to fight to win nor (to) end the sacrifice if it was not worth the cost.

more suspiciously

gone (were) the way of dueling, cavalry charges, and trench warfare.

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• 同意 -忌忆- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/22/2009 postreply 20:46:23

• 回复：回复：大家看看这段是否有错？摘自美国传统杂志。。。 -akc- ♂ (295 bytes) () 10/23/2009 postreply 06:40:48

• but ... -nothingjustagain- ♂ (102 bytes) () 10/23/2009 postreply 09:23:56

• in a formal writing, of is more used in the kind of cases -nothingjustagain- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2009 postreply 09:38:35

• the first fix is a must; the second not because ... -nothingjustagain- ♂ (90 bytes) () 10/23/2009 postreply 09:35:00