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回答: 中国大学教学质量是世界一流吗?我爱瑞士2009-10-06 02:02:57

不好意思,本人绝对半桶水,就喜欢挑挑刺:

When making a judgement or evaluatoin, one needs to have a set of criteria. If criteria are different, we are very difficult to reach a consensus.
( 探讨1:an evaluation?, 2:we are very difficult? 这是中国英语,it's difficult 好点)
The academic success is not a warrant for one to succeed in business. Talents have different forms.
It is not rare that a straight A student in a prestigious college will be successful in the future.
(3,这里前面说全A学生时不绝对(not rare),后面却用will, will 就是很绝对的意识,不搭,用CAN比较搭。)
It simply reflects his or her hard work during college. If he or she wants to excell in the future, one needs strive to engage him/her in the new battle.
A was is comprised of many battles, and life is full of wars:)...
(4,life is full of wars? war是大战役,就是很多人死磕,感觉还不如fights,一个人搞)

Even if one is successful in achieving all As in the college.
(5,不带THE:in college)

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