Your intonation is improving in this one.

I didn't catch obvious mistakes.

some "clock"sounds little like /v/ (upside down) instead of /c/ (mirror of c)

Good job.

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• Thank you for your encouragment. -blueswan- ♀ (123 bytes) () 08/30/2009 postreply 16:32:45

• About "clock" -lilac09- ♀ (183 bytes) () 08/30/2009 postreply 17:01:59

• 我今天问了问美国人，他们说是V。不过我也不清楚， -blueswan- ♀ (51 bytes) () 08/31/2009 postreply 22:51:27