Good work

来源: eyeyey 于 2009-03-17 20:46:44 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (185 bytes)

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Diversity has played a role shaping the city's growth

There is a big pitch raise on Role, I think it might be better if the pitch is down on Role.

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