另一学生答grep， 仿李唐

My king, you raised the white flag on wall,
In a deep palace, how could I hear the call?
hundred thousand soldiers, all laid down arms,
Not even one was manly enough to stand tall.


附：李唐译

The king had raised on wall the flag of truce,
And I in palace deep had heard no news.
When fourteen thousand all disarmed at front,
Not even one was manly brave to count.

翻译是按十音一句，五步抑扬格（iambic pentermeter），临行韵脚。


<<国亡诗>> (北宋) 费花蕊夫人

君王城上竖降旗,
妾在深宫那得知?
十四万人齐解甲,
更无一个是男儿.

所有跟帖： 

• 很好。 -grep- ♀ (14 bytes) () 01/07/2009 postreply 18:34:24

• 还有，第一句的说话对象不对 -李唐- ♂ (68 bytes) () 01/08/2009 postreply 07:44:11