Gray

Gray

The sun bleaches from rise to set
till the noon forgets its heat

Time gives you four seasons
rinsed off colors

The shards you collect
rotate in a kaleidoscope of reasons

Through every gaze your vision
darkened and sharpened

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• Through every gaze your vision darkened and sharpened. -JoyAnna.- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2026 postreply 13:13:59

• Thanks for quoting! -zhouqichan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2026 postreply 14:17:42

• Well written. It's quiet but really sharp. -JoyAnna.- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2026 postreply 13:16:55

• feels like everything's fading -JoyAnna.- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2026 postreply 13:19:26

• yet your clarity is getting stronger. -JoyAnna.- ♀ (167 bytes) () 05/02/2026 postreply 13:20:42

• Thanks for your kind comments! I'm truly flattered -zhouqichan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2026 postreply 14:18:13

• The sun bleaches。。。--这个想象好！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2026 postreply 20:23:38

• thanks for your kind comments, 暖冬cool夏 -zhouqichan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2026 postreply 09:30:06