Thanks JA, there is always something half revealed

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回答: Cloud-threads over the moon.Why is every gaze a parenthesis? 由 JoyAnna. 于 2026-04-20 18:26:18

and not fully understood to me in each gaze. Initially I wrote only the 1st stanze, maybe I should just end there and remove the 2nd half. somehow I feel these two don't belong together, yet I like them.

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• 这写的莫非是蒙娜丽莎的微笑？ -JoyAnna.- ♀ (1467 bytes) () 04/21/2026 postreply 04:55:20

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