A Beijing Beauty

With delicate features and a cold, aloof demeanor, she embodied a kind of modern royalty in the Beijing social circles. People loved to speculate about her—why she never smiled, why she kept her distance. To most, she was a mystery, and that only added to her allure. "She looks to kill," her admirers whispered. But she knew better—she must stay alert, or she would be the one killed, pun unintended. 

 

 

In the glitzy world of the elite, she navigated the endless stream of high-society parties with ease. One evening, there was a little gala in honor of an influential figure from the CC Party, offering the well-connected a chance to secure their next deal, their next favor. While others clung to flattery and flirtation, she remained unfazed, calculating, always aware of her surroundings. Her cool look had a rising Zhongnanhai star figuratively crawling toward her. Soon enough, an affair was in the offing...

 

The Tesla hummed quietly as she drove home just before dawn. The dark glass kept the world out. She smiled as she was finally alone—or was she? Another Tesla followed, shadowing her when the first light of day crept in.

 

--- danubeB 

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It's been a while! If my creative writing feels familiar, -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 14:59:00

let's catch up. I've missed you all. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 15:00:02

think I know who U r ;-)). Nice writing & welcome back! -最西边的岛上- 给 最西边的岛上 发送悄悄话 最西边的岛上 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 16:01:16

Howdy? You're warming my heart, big time. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 18:57:03

HowdyStranger~~it's quiet here, morePlayer theMerrier (note: -最西边的岛上- 给 最西边的岛上 发送悄悄话 最西边的岛上 的博客首页 (327 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:25:39

It's music to my ears. Thanks! -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 21:43:38

这就是解放前所说的“交际花”吗? -永远老李- 给 永远老李 发送悄悄话 (85 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 17:05:21

“交际花” is pretty close, I guess. It's her cover, anyway. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 18:59:14

"Social butterfly"? More like a honey trap. -方榫- 给 方榫 发送悄悄话 方榫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:42:00

Social butterfly? Honey trap? What else? -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 21:44:59

Many thanks for checking out my microfiction! -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:00:25

Love the perfect writing!Welcome back!Thrilled to see u back -暖冬cool夏- 给 暖冬cool夏 发送悄悄话 暖冬cool夏 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 17:58:23

Your writing is concise and beautiful! Lots to learn! -暖冬cool夏- 给 暖冬cool夏 发送悄悄话 暖冬cool夏 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 17:59:09

+1 :-). 2 bad 白云MM ain't here now but she'll be very happy2! -最西边的岛上- 给 最西边的岛上 发送悄悄话 最西边的岛上 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 18:22:39

I miss 白云 badly. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:13:48

A buddy of mine--you know who--has urged me to get back -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:07:12

in action.Hibernation is over.He practices what he preaches. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:10:37

+1,This is your world--论坛欢迎每一个人,更何况你的水平这么高、好!It‘s a blessing -暖冬cool夏- 给 暖冬cool夏 发送悄悄话 暖冬cool夏 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 20:22:48

Frankly, writing is always something humbling to me. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 21:48:53

I am afraid I need to work harder when it comes to writing. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 21:46:35

Is this lady a femme fatale or a tragic heroine? -方榫- 给 方榫 发送悄悄话 方榫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:45:12

She has to be both, in a way. Her 'cold, aloof demeanor' is -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:47:14

her armor, but it’s also what draws people in and makes her -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:48:10

a target. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:49:32

The part about the 'Zhongnanhai star' figuratively crawling -方榫- 给 方榫 发送悄悄话 方榫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:51:52

toward her is so vivid. It perfectly captures the power -方榫- 给 方榫 发送悄悄话 方榫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:52:58

dynamics. Is he a potential partner or a new threat? -方榫- 给 方榫 发送悄悄话 方榫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:54:00

Great question! He's a bit of both. He's powerful and sees -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:58:23

her as a prize, but she's not someone who is easily won. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 19:59:11

She’s too smart for that. This isn't a simple romance; -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 20:00:15

it's a high-stakes game of chess. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 20:00:51

Checkmate! Goodnight! -方榫- 给 方榫 发送悄悄话 方榫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 20:05:18

:) -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/04/2025 postreply 20:05:49

Why do you use past tense? -Bsq- 给 Bsq 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 04:22:26

Why not? Happy Tuesday! -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 06:34:47

You’re telling a story that happens at present time. -Bsq- 给 Bsq 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 06:39:54

How so? -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 06:46:13

Tesla’s telling -Bsq- 给 Bsq 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 07:03:14

Telling what? I'm afraid you're losing me. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 07:08:26

It’s just my thought. Your story is great! Please continue.. -Bsq- 给 Bsq 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 07:19:13

That's very nice of you! Just a thought of mine:news reports -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 07:30:34

are circulated in the past tense even though they are about -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 07:32:30

current affairs. In terms of creative writing, one is free t -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 07:36:21

to use the present tense in narrating a past event. I can -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 07:39:17

live with that. Have a good one! -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 07:40:34

Thanks for sharing! Great story! -硅谷居士- 给 硅谷居士 发送悄悄话 硅谷居士 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 08:47:52

Thanks! I'm flattered. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 15:22:17

I'd say she's doing a woman's hardest job, juggling wolves. -硅谷居士- 给 硅谷居士 发送悄悄话 硅谷居士 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 08:51:26

It is a difficult world, isn't it? -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 15:24:26

Wow, “She looks to kill”! It reads like a scene from a movie -JoyAnna.- 给 JoyAnna. 发送悄悄话 JoyAnna. 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 16:59:59

Can't wait to see where this story goes next. -JoyAnna.- 给 JoyAnna. 发送悄悄话 JoyAnna. 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 17:00:23

Look who's here? I can't be more thrilled. I'm humbled. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 19:44:28

Honestly what might happen to her is anyone's guess. Let the -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 19:49:44

story unfold itself.Time is on the author's side, is it not? -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/05/2025 postreply 19:52:08

Your word is magic. -renaulteu- 给 renaulteu 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 08/07/2025 postreply 10:18:50

Your compliments are quite overwhelming. I'm speechless. -danubeB- 给 danubeB 发送悄悄话 danubeB 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/07/2025 postreply 14:27:00

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