暖冬谬赞了。这几句是SUNO加的：）我的原诗很简单的。

When Doubt Comes In (2021-09-22 15:26:29)下一个

When doubt comes in
Clouds start piling up in the sky
Layer upon layer
Till all the lights are out

It's dark and cold inside and out
No layers of clothes can block the wind
That comes from the cold land

A storm is forming
It's getting stronger every minute
I see it
I sense it
Yet, I can't do anything about it
I can't change the directions

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• When doubt comes in Clouds start piling up the sky这个铺垫开场很好 -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/13/2024 postreply 21:18:21

• Thank you! I'm glad you think so :) -甜虫虫- ♀ (164 bytes) () 06/14/2024 postreply 08:54:20

• Missed a preposition in the second verse :) -甜虫虫- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/14/2024 postreply 10:35:32